Make a narrative text (Writing's Assignment)


Another the Little Red Riding Hood Story
(based on her diary)
“ Maybe, I’m the antagonist character in the story” that’s the sentence on the second page of little girl’s diary.  After about fifteen minutes, heard a wolf’s scream and suddenly he stricken down the diary which have read by him untill finished, and then he directly ran very fast into the forest.
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 long time ago, in the edge of forest, lived a little girl named Barbara with her grandmother.  Barbara was 12 years old, she was a kind and friendly girl, she did not only help another people, but she also loved animals and plants.
One day, Barbara and her grandmother went to the wild forest for took firewood, the forest fully with the wolves.  In the middle of the way, they met with some of the wolves, her grandmother shocked and she felt afraid, she tried to hit them with a big stone, one of wolves automatically attacked back the grandmother, he bited her leg and finally the grandmother got a seriously wounded.  Barbara directly helped and brought her grandmother back home.  The grandmother stupor and it made Barbara was panic and worry.  Because it, Barbara visited the doctor to asked medicine for her grandmother, but the doctor said that her grandmother would get well soon if her grandmother ate a fresh meat of the wolf, he also said that her grandmother would get death if she didn’t  eat a wolf’s meal on the three days.  But a drop of the wolf’s fresh blood could  delay her death.
Barbara was very confused, she though over and over again to found a solution, suddenly she wear a red chasuble and brought bow and she went into wild forest.  She found the wolf carefully and hit it with her stupor poison bow, the wolf got unconscious.  Barbara took again her bow from the wolf’s body and she took a little piece of the wolf’s blood.  Barbara did the action scores of times, every three days she hit the wolf in the wild forest and took their blood for her grandmother.  Have been 37 wolves in that forest which got wounded because Barbara’s action.  That instance made a king of the wolf was wrath.  “ Wounded must be payed with the wounded again, and maybe it is more cruel” said a king of wolf.
A king of wolf arranged a strategy to catch Barbara, “We must catch the little red riding hood for our revenge” he said.  He assembled his wolf’s team to surround Barbara.  They put net above the tree, they hid behind the tree, they put a bait for Barbara.  On the next day, Barbara did the same action, Barbara did not know about the revenge.  When Barbara was taking back her bow, suddenly the net fallen down, but Barbara directly moved quickly, escape from the net.  She ran very fast left the forest, the wolves ran after her.
Barbara arrived in front of her house, but she was tired, her body fallen down on the earth, nothing a little force from her.  Eventually, the wolves found Barbara.  “Hahahaha, finally the bad little red riding hood meet with her unfortunate day, really unlucky time for this girl.  Bring her into forest, kill her in front of your friend which have gotten wounded because her!” asked a king of wolf to the his team.  They directly brought Barbara into the forest.
A king of wolf felt that there was something (with his insting) inside the little red riding hood’s house, he tried to open the door and enter in.  He saw an old woman who was lying on the bed, he also saw many wolf pictures on the wall.  The pictures were adorned by heart symbol, and on the bottom of pictures there was name “© MY WOLFY ©”.  He saw an interesting book on the table with the picture’s cover : a little girl was carrying on a little wolf, but the title: “I and my funny squirrel”.  He tried to open that diary and read it untill finished.
On the first page he read “ I love my grand mother and my squirrel, but I’m actually wrong, that’s not a squirrel, that’s a wolf.  I know it when I’m ten years old, hahahahaha how a stupid I am!”.  On the second page “ Maybe, I’m the antagonist character in the story”.  On the third page “ I must hit a wolf today, but I want not to kill them”.  On the fourth page “I must hit a wolf today, but I want not to kill them”.  The same sentence was written untill 39th page, and on the 40th page (the last page of the diary) he read “Nonsense for me if I must kill a wolf, it means that I kill my wolfy, but I must hit them so that I can get a drop of their fresh blood for my grand mother, she must alive”, he read also signature with the name Barbara.
A wolf screamed and suddenly he stricken down the diary which have read by him, he directly ran very fast into the forest, he hoped so that the little red riding hood has been killed yet.  He remembered about five years ago when he met with his little angel, he remembered all moments with his little angel named Barbara, Barbara was a girl who have ever helped him from the archer, she looked after and cured him untill he got well soon, she always bring a meat for wolfy in the forest, they played together in the green forest.  Wolfy remembered the first moment when Barbara was talking to him “Hallo, my name is Barbara, I’ve save you from the archer, so now you are mine, and you are my funny squirrel, from now we will play together and have fun forever”.  About three years they were together, but since the green forest burned up, they have never met again.
Wolfy arrived in the forest and met his team, he directly asked to them about the little red riding hood.  “Where is the little red riding hood? Where is my Barbara?” he asked loudly.  But, How pity Barbara is! He was died, her body was fully with blood because bited by wolves.  Wolfy cried loudly, he regretted this incident.  Finally, wolfy changed Barbara to looked after the grandmother, he always took a drop of his blood for Barbara’s grandmother.  Wolfy gave a name “The Little Red Riding Hood” for his kingdom and he established a Barbara’s red chasuble as his kingdom’s flag.


Moral value: Don’t judge the people from one side only, you must know about  their reason do it (something that they have done).
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Jumat, 20 September 2013

Make a narrative text (Writing's Assignment)


Another the Little Red Riding Hood Story
(based on her diary)
“ Maybe, I’m the antagonist character in the story” that’s the sentence on the second page of little girl’s diary.  After about fifteen minutes, heard a wolf’s scream and suddenly he stricken down the diary which have read by him untill finished, and then he directly ran very fast into the forest.
A
 long time ago, in the edge of forest, lived a little girl named Barbara with her grandmother.  Barbara was 12 years old, she was a kind and friendly girl, she did not only help another people, but she also loved animals and plants.
One day, Barbara and her grandmother went to the wild forest for took firewood, the forest fully with the wolves.  In the middle of the way, they met with some of the wolves, her grandmother shocked and she felt afraid, she tried to hit them with a big stone, one of wolves automatically attacked back the grandmother, he bited her leg and finally the grandmother got a seriously wounded.  Barbara directly helped and brought her grandmother back home.  The grandmother stupor and it made Barbara was panic and worry.  Because it, Barbara visited the doctor to asked medicine for her grandmother, but the doctor said that her grandmother would get well soon if her grandmother ate a fresh meat of the wolf, he also said that her grandmother would get death if she didn’t  eat a wolf’s meal on the three days.  But a drop of the wolf’s fresh blood could  delay her death.
Barbara was very confused, she though over and over again to found a solution, suddenly she wear a red chasuble and brought bow and she went into wild forest.  She found the wolf carefully and hit it with her stupor poison bow, the wolf got unconscious.  Barbara took again her bow from the wolf’s body and she took a little piece of the wolf’s blood.  Barbara did the action scores of times, every three days she hit the wolf in the wild forest and took their blood for her grandmother.  Have been 37 wolves in that forest which got wounded because Barbara’s action.  That instance made a king of the wolf was wrath.  “ Wounded must be payed with the wounded again, and maybe it is more cruel” said a king of wolf.
A king of wolf arranged a strategy to catch Barbara, “We must catch the little red riding hood for our revenge” he said.  He assembled his wolf’s team to surround Barbara.  They put net above the tree, they hid behind the tree, they put a bait for Barbara.  On the next day, Barbara did the same action, Barbara did not know about the revenge.  When Barbara was taking back her bow, suddenly the net fallen down, but Barbara directly moved quickly, escape from the net.  She ran very fast left the forest, the wolves ran after her.
Barbara arrived in front of her house, but she was tired, her body fallen down on the earth, nothing a little force from her.  Eventually, the wolves found Barbara.  “Hahahaha, finally the bad little red riding hood meet with her unfortunate day, really unlucky time for this girl.  Bring her into forest, kill her in front of your friend which have gotten wounded because her!” asked a king of wolf to the his team.  They directly brought Barbara into the forest.
A king of wolf felt that there was something (with his insting) inside the little red riding hood’s house, he tried to open the door and enter in.  He saw an old woman who was lying on the bed, he also saw many wolf pictures on the wall.  The pictures were adorned by heart symbol, and on the bottom of pictures there was name “© MY WOLFY ©”.  He saw an interesting book on the table with the picture’s cover : a little girl was carrying on a little wolf, but the title: “I and my funny squirrel”.  He tried to open that diary and read it untill finished.
On the first page he read “ I love my grand mother and my squirrel, but I’m actually wrong, that’s not a squirrel, that’s a wolf.  I know it when I’m ten years old, hahahahaha how a stupid I am!”.  On the second page “ Maybe, I’m the antagonist character in the story”.  On the third page “ I must hit a wolf today, but I want not to kill them”.  On the fourth page “I must hit a wolf today, but I want not to kill them”.  The same sentence was written untill 39th page, and on the 40th page (the last page of the diary) he read “Nonsense for me if I must kill a wolf, it means that I kill my wolfy, but I must hit them so that I can get a drop of their fresh blood for my grand mother, she must alive”, he read also signature with the name Barbara.
A wolf screamed and suddenly he stricken down the diary which have read by him, he directly ran very fast into the forest, he hoped so that the little red riding hood has been killed yet.  He remembered about five years ago when he met with his little angel, he remembered all moments with his little angel named Barbara, Barbara was a girl who have ever helped him from the archer, she looked after and cured him untill he got well soon, she always bring a meat for wolfy in the forest, they played together in the green forest.  Wolfy remembered the first moment when Barbara was talking to him “Hallo, my name is Barbara, I’ve save you from the archer, so now you are mine, and you are my funny squirrel, from now we will play together and have fun forever”.  About three years they were together, but since the green forest burned up, they have never met again.
Wolfy arrived in the forest and met his team, he directly asked to them about the little red riding hood.  “Where is the little red riding hood? Where is my Barbara?” he asked loudly.  But, How pity Barbara is! He was died, her body was fully with blood because bited by wolves.  Wolfy cried loudly, he regretted this incident.  Finally, wolfy changed Barbara to looked after the grandmother, he always took a drop of his blood for Barbara’s grandmother.  Wolfy gave a name “The Little Red Riding Hood” for his kingdom and he established a Barbara’s red chasuble as his kingdom’s flag.


Moral value: Don’t judge the people from one side only, you must know about  their reason do it (something that they have done).

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